The Path of The Story

After getting Simon's feedback for my script, I decided to take his advice and change the story a bit to make it more believable. The story stopped from being a young girl going to her new psychiatrists session, to a young girl in a mental institute going to her rehab session with her new shrink. The reason of this, is because the girl has killed already many people and many people will not believe that she is still free and not in jail. Since she has D.I.D, she will be able to go to a mad house instead of jail. The story ended up good and had some major changes, specially location, but in the end I believe is good enough.